Saturday, December 20, 2008

Imaginary Perspective

The things I nitpick at are just not the same.
Are they really worth picking apart?
Should I really correct little things that bother me?
Is that I really really need to do?

If I correct it, will something else just become more noticeable?
Will correcting that period actually make it Shakespearean?

Or is it the big picture?

Is that Shakespearean piece really what's wrong with it?
No matter fixing the grammar if it's going to end up no better in the end.

Then again, maybe it makes all the difference.

Maybe one rose on the doorstep can solve anything.
Maybe one letter in your mailbox can help the situation.
Maybe one tiny fit of rage will make something more understandable.

It's hard to tell until someone actually goes through with those things.

I'm not the best person in the world. I know for a fact that there are way better people out there than me. I know that I'm not always the most moral.

But I know that I don't deserve this.

2 comments:

Alyssa <3 said...

wow....moving wat cna Isay...
very powerful
and you cna kind of feel the emotion
adn outrage or
angrytoen coming off of it
it has a very distinct tone...
I like it :)

elissa said...

love it.
and i hate how i cant think of anything creative to say ever on your blogs.