Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Second Thoughts

I've got rejection in my blood
It's nothing to be proud of
The problem with being anything
Is handling responsibility

I'm not sure if I've fallen for you
or if I've just fallen
If love is so speechless,
why has it come calling?

Flashes of brilliance are showing
Somebody tell me where I'm going
On the reset, my life is loading
I wish you were here to say hello

I'll go back to my hiding place
It's destroying all meaning of the race
The sewer of society
is best for me

But why do I stay so down?
It's not worth the blues hanging around.
We're just close acquaintances,
Being more just doesn't make sense

It doesn't make sense.

Shhh...

3 comments:

Muffin said...

i wanted to say that this is really good, but that seems so generic and bland.
so im hopeing that telling you that will help it not seem so generic and bland, but i dnt think its really working..

I told him, "I'm a monster" said...

Hm. I like this. It gives off a very mysterious vibe. But I'm Nancy Drew, so I'll figure out the mystery somehow.

Alyssa <3 said...

I dont know how I missed this! haha but better late then never right? wells, I liked it even though it kinda makes me sad. I mean I kno I dont always follow it myself but you never know until you try right? Why decide it wont happen right of the bat? Great writing though.